I thought I wasn't going to manage a Poetry Bus ticket this time. I've been writing quite a lot on the blog in the past week (all about the best side of pop music – starting with part one
here and working right up to part five
here) and I just thought enough was enough. I half thought I might post an old poem about making big decisions (that's
here) but then in the end I took a couple of minutes to really read the prompt and think about it. Here's the prompt:
"Write about one of the following:
(1) a time you had to choose between two clearly divergent paths; (2) a time you were called to walk a path you didn't choose for yourself; or (3) a time you refused to travel the path you were called to follow."
Suddenly number 3 made me remember a time (about 12 years ago) when I was working in a crappy job and someone told me to do something that I considered stupid/wasteful/wrong. It wasn't a huge matter of global significance or anything... but it was still one of those moments when you think 'this is a decision I can make – what will I choose? Who the hell am I after all? Do I stand up to be counted etc.' And so the ticket reads like this:
No Do it
they saidJust do it
No questions
Drop the attitude
You don't need
To know why
Just do it
The way we say
Do it quickly
Do it now
So I thought about it
Long and hard
And then I said NoRF 2010
Maybe I should send it to a politician or two (Mr
Clegg? Still time to step down, make a stand, be who you said you were...).
Other Bus travellers are
here. Unless my records are wrong this is my 50th trip on the Poetry Bus! Can't quite believe that...
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30 comments:
Like the poem, like the sentiment behind it, like your views on Nick Clegg. Isn't it shameful that it now seems as though they changed their mind about student fees before the elec tion.
And politicians wonder why the public gets cynical...
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At least you're not a girl who can't say no. Nice one.
Yeah! Now if I could only make that speech myself at work right now.
"Santa" asked what I wanted for Christmas and he said I should quit this job...just as soon as I have another lined up. ;)
I like this one. Typically when someone says, "drop the attitude" I dig my heels in and tell them to kiss my fanny, so I'm right behind you on this.
Kat
Thanks all. But Kat... if you said that here you might get some surprised faces (and unwelcome advances...). Language difference alert...
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I like it and the sentiment behind it. (and I wrote that without reading your first comment-in case you think I am an outrageous copier!) And also what the weaver of grass said about Nick Clegg!
The courage of your convictions ~ I like this!
Good for you, Rachel! In some ways, this prompt was inspired by a road I've recently had to travel - - one where I finally, like you, just said, "No!" It was the right decision, but it will have far-reaching consequences that I know will be difficult to live with. I should have done it long ago. (Too fresh to write about - although my last bus poem alluded to it "all my ghosts are friends/the things I should but do not say" -- Finally said them!!!
It gets worse. Clegg: "I should have been more careful... [about signing the pledge] at the time I thought I could do it"
Unless I've got my dates and times mixed up (and I don't think I have) then that was a breathtaking lie, even by politician standards.
The Guardian have now exposed how he didn't think he could do it. On the contrary, he knew he was going to ditch it:
http://www.guardian.co.uk/politics/2010/nov/12/lib-dems-tuition-fees-clegg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BQFwxw57NBI
It's great to have the courage of your convictions!
Thanks people. Re the LibDems business in the UK... the Tories and the Labour Party must be laughing... how could the LibDems make such a mess (and take all the heat off everyone else!)?
Karen... I am so nosey/interested in people's stories... that I am now keen to know the rest of that road! Keep them hanging on, eh..?
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Oh yes! The joys of saying 'No' especially when a 'Yes!' is expected. Love its brevity too.
Yes, for a person who talk all the legs off many donkeys I can be surprisingly brief in poems!
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Great gumption! A road usually not taken. We just do what we are told whether it makes sense or not.
This is great, and yknow I'm kinda jealous cos I know it's true - you really are that brave...
Fab poem
Brave or stupid! Who knows...
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The proper word, spoken in the proper place, moves mountains, Rachel!
Applause!
Believe me, it's a road I wish I didn't have to travel. Let's just say it involves a love-hate relationship with a boss whose wife works for me and wants what she wants when she wants it by golly, by gosh, by damn! I finally took a stand and the rest is yet to be seen. May be taking early retirement! :-)
Good for you! Good poem for us too!
I've always driven my bosses crazy - if they can't give me a good reason for doing something & if I don't agree with the reason I might do it will ill grace, or I might not do it at all!
Karen - good for you! And scary I know...
Thanks all, for reading.
Karen - very brave! It feels good though to come out of the shadows...
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I'm with you on this, we all agree too easily! At least I do at times!
Hello Rachel,
The poetry2010 project is finished. It all prints to 12 pages. You just click on my smiley yellow star to find it. Many thanks for your contribution,
best bardic wishes,
gwilym
Yes, Socks, I agree!
And PiR - lovely page of words. I espcially like Dominic's 'the Last Days' and Gordon's 'Diamond' and Joan's 'Heptonstall'.
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sometimes we do.
brave,
powerful post.
Welcome to our potluck week 10, a poetry award is assigned upon submission.
Old poems are welcome …hurry up, you have 12 hours to go before we are closed.
Hope to see you there. Cheers!
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/11/poetry-potluck-moods-feelings-and.html
Thanks for your comments.
I like it, and I can hear it.
It's 'Drop the attitude' as the fourth line that's so telling for me.
50!?
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